BOOK EDITING SERVICES
Professional feedback on the strengths and needs of your fiction manuscript, poetry collection, or children's picture book.
Editing services, prices, and turnaround times are subject to change.
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Note: I charge less than most professional editors because my turnaround time is longer due to health reasons.
For a look at what most professional editors charge, see https://www.the-efa.org/rates/ .​
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FOR NOVELS AND LONG FICTION:
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Free Sample Edits and Consultation
Try out my editing services to decide if we're a good fit!
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Get a free half-hour consultation via your choice of phone call, FaceTime, text message, email, or Zoom.​
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For all editing services except line editing, poetry, and picture books:
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First 1,000 words of your manuscript free. (Sensitivity/Accuracy reads may use 1000 words from elsewhere in their manuscript.)
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For line editing: First 500 words of your manuscript free.
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For poetry: 100 words free.
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For children’s picture book: an additional free half-hour consultation (2 max) following a free read through of your manuscript.
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Complimentary Book Services (optional)
With purchase of any editing or book service:
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Free email consultations for four weeks after the author receives deliverables.
With purchase of a Full Developmental Edit or Line Edit:
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Free email consultations for three months after the author receives deliverables.
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Two free one-hour consultations via your choice of phone call, FaceTime, text message, email, or Zoom.​ (It is advised that one be used prior to the start of editing and one be used after.)
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Discounts
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Second or subsequent passes on a manuscript for full developmental editing or line editing, after changes are implemented from the first pass: 25% off.
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Second or additional service for the same manuscript: 25% off.
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Donors to the Hands Off Uhuru campaign (HandsOffUhuru.Org): 25% off.
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Members of the Uhuru Movement: 25% off.
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Donors to Palestinian fundraisers: 25% off.
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Manuscript Critique
Includes feedback on:
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"Big picture" aspects of your manuscript, such as: story structure, plot cohesion, story clarity, character voice, character arcs, themes, and narrative voice.
What you'll receive, after one careful read through:
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Sidebar comments with specific feedback and reactions.
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An editorial letter of about 5 pages, double spaced, with feedback on the overall manuscript and suggested next steps.
PRICE: $0.01 USD per word (Ex. 80,000 word novel = $800 USD).
TURNAROUND TIME: One week per 20,000 words (Ex. 80,0000 word novel = 4 weeks).
PAYMENT PLAN: (unless otherwise negotiated) 10% to book, 40% on editor’s start date, 50% at author’s receipt of deliverables.
Full Developmental Edit
Includes in-depth feedback on:
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Plot and Story Structure
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Pacing, Voice, and Style
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Characterization, Character Voice, and Character Arcs
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Themes, Imagery, and Symbolism
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Sensitivity and Accuracy: any big picture recommendations and concerns
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Content or Trigger Warnings: any big picture recommendations and concerns
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Age-Appropriateness (mainly for Young Adult and Middle Grade books)
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Any major issues regarding historical accuracy and setting (for some historical or historically-inspired fiction)
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and more!
What you'll receive, after about two read throughs:
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Detailed sidebar comments with narrative and character feedback.
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An in-depth editorial letter, double spaced, with feedback on the overall manuscript, along with suggested next steps.
COST: $0.02 USD per word (Ex. 80,000 word novel = $1600 USD).
TURNAROUND TIME: One week per 10,000 words (Ex. 80,000 word novel = 8 weeks).
PAYMENT PLAN: (unless otherwise negotiated) 10% to book, 40% on editor’s start date, 50% at author’s receipt of deliverables.
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Line Edit (includes a light copy edit)
Only manuscripts that have received developmental editing by myself or another editor will be accepted.
Includes feedback on:
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Sentence clarity, Word choice, and Readability
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Artistic and narrative impact
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Emotional impact
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Narrative and description continuity
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Consistency and distinction of character voices and mannerisms
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Pointing out any major issues regarding potentially offensive or inadvertently harmful word choices
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Age-appropriate word choice (mainly for Young Adult and Middle Grade)
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Some minor feedback regarding major spelling and grammatical errors (i.e. a light copyedit)
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Any major issues regarding period-appropriate language or logistics (for some historical or historically-inspired fiction)
What you'll receive:​
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Sidebar comments with narrative and artistic feedback on the sentence-by-sentence level.
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An editorial letter, double spaced, with feedback on the overall prose and dialogue, with suggested next steps.
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Mini style sheet for your copyeditor or proofreader.
Note: this service does NOT include:
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Thorough copyediting or proofreading, aka comprehensive feedback on spelling, grammar, or sentence structure.
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Historical consulting or accuracy reading.
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Ghostwriting or in-text changes.
COST: $0.025 USD per word (Ex. 80,000 word novel = $2000 USD).
TURNAROUND TIME: One week per 5,000 words (Ex. 80,000 word novel = 16 weeks).
PAYMENT PLAN: (unless otherwise negotiated) 10% to book, 40% on editor’s start date, 50% at author’s receipt of deliverables.​
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FOR SHORT FICTION AND POETRY:
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Edit for a Poetry Collection (approx. 5000-7000 words)
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Two rounds of edits.
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Developmental edits, including poem order.
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Line edits, including a light copy edit.
COST: $0.08 USD per word (Ex. 5000 poetry collection = $400 USD).
TURNAROUND TIME: approx. 4 weeks per editing round.
PAYMENT PLAN: (unless otherwise negotiated) $50 USD to book, the remaining amount at author’s receipt of deliverables.
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Edit for Individual Poems, Short Stories, or Short Fiction
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Two rounds of edits.
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Developmental and line edits, including a light copy edit.
COST: $0.10 USD per word ($5 USD minimum) (ex. 250 word poem = $25 USD)​
TURNAROUND TIME: approx. 1-3 days per 250 words, per editing round.
PAYMENT PLAN: (unless otherwise negotiated) Total amount upfront.
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Edit for a Children's Picture Book (approx. 1000 words)
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Two rounds of edits.
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Developmental and line edit, including a light copy edit.
COST: $150 USD flat rate.
TURNAROUND TIME: approx. one week per editing round.
PAYMENT PLAN: (unless otherwise negotiated) $50 USD upfront, $100 USD at author’s receipt of deliverables.